Angel of Death

Hello Olivia! How've you been? Well, I quite liked this. The person before me picked out the two nit-picks I had seen, so I'll just go into content. I think ...

Hey there, Shina! (did I spell that right?) Well, I'm here as I promised. I've only did the prologue and the first chapter cuz I have to get off in ...

Hey Sarah! I really really love this chapter! It was much improved as the others and I think you're finally grasping Anne's character. I like that you described the carriage ...

Thanks Jack! This critique was very helpful and it was a really good 1,001st review if I say so myself. Yeah, I kinda felt that the characters weren't fleshed out ...

Hey Sarah! I think this deserves to be another one of my favorite pieces by you. I like it's simple complexities and the beautiful metaphors and words you use. It's ...

Hello there! I did really enjoy this but I think you're not taking advantage of what potential this story has. You really should think about making this longer and have ...

Hello there! Hmm, I think this has the potential to be something greater. It just seems like you have one huge sentence that's simply a statement. Throw in some colorful ...

Hey Adrian! I quite liked this and I believe it's another one of my favorites from you. This captured the true essence of love and not just "Don't leave me, ...

Hey there! Haven't read anything of yours in a while. I quite like this. It has this Alternative feel to it and I like the story that this tells and ...

Me! I'll take it! ~Angel

Hey there! Welcome to YWS, I'm Angel of Death but you can call me Angel. I really am on two sides of the fence with this one. I liked it ...

Hello there! I haven't seen you around here before. I'm Angel of Death but everyone calls me Angel *shakes hand* I quite like this but the latter of this seems ...

Hey Ash! sad! Though I never really liked Carmen, now that made him different I can't help but feel sorry for him. Why can't they be together? Why? *takes a ...

Awe darn, I always come late! All I can say is that I liked this. It was funny and a little bit disturbing as I'm bout to eat lunch and ...

I still stand by the Purps! ~Angel